There are moments where the transitions between phrases sound very choppy, as if the sections are struggling to connect smoothly. This disrupts the flow of the music and makes the overall texture feel fragmented. It would be great if the phrasing could be more fluid, with better legato playing, allowing for more seamless transitions between phrases. Additionally, some of the articulation choices could be adjusted to create a more cohesive sound across both the strings and woodwinds. I’d really appreciate it if you could address this and make the necessary improvements as soon as possible.”